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Submitted: November 23, 2012
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Free Lineartby *XxTheExiledOnexX

Digital Art / Drawings / Animals

^{Okay! This is my first lineart. Free to use, free to edit, just as long as you keep my signature on this.
Link me the finished product! I hope you like it~

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I edited it a little. Hope it looks better.}

Critique by ~xBlujayx Mar 26, 2013, 6:42:15 PM

For starters, the atonomy isn't as built as a living wolf's. If your aiming for a cartooned point of view, or realistic, I suppose you look at real wolves.(Which is a good starter) and study their paws meanwhile. Shrink the head and make the body more plump. You might aswell want to shrink the tail and study a wolf's tail to perfect. Try to study the eye, if your trying cartoony or realism. (Eyes are concealed, not open!) Try to sketch more of each body part on a different page then once you feel your more open to parts of a wolf.

Nice job anyways!

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Critique by ~Obsidianthewolf Nov 23, 2012, 12:28:58 PM

I really like the anatomy. The improvement is very well visible. The head is amazing, I don't find anything wrong with it. The chest is a good level of fur and fluff. Although the body could be a LITTLE bit shorter. Other then that it's well done. The back legs could do a little work, but I bet that could be fixed on your own time. No rush. As well as the front legs. The tail is not to fluffy it's just perfect. You did a wonderful job. Your future work will look wonder full in time. Keep working hard!