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Free Lineart by XxTheExiledOnexX Free Lineart by XxTheExiledOnexX
Okay! This is my first lineart. Free to use, free to edit, just as long as you keep my signature on this.
Link me the finished product! I hope you like it~

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I edited it a little. Hope it looks better.
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I really like the anatomy. The improvement is very well visible. The head is amazing, I don't find anything wrong with it. The chest is a good level of fur and fluff. Although the body could be a LITTLE bit shorter. Other then that it's well done. The back legs could do a little work, but I bet that could be fixed on your own time. No rush. As well as the front legs. The tail is not to fluffy it's just perfect. You did a wonderful job. Your future work will look wonder full in time. Keep working hard!
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Critique by xBlujayx Mar 26, 2013, 6:42:15 PM
For starters, the atonomy isn't as built as a living wolf's. If your aiming for a cartooned point of view, or realistic, I suppose you look at real wolves.(Which is a good starter) and study their paws meanwhile. Shrink the head and make the body more plump. You might aswell want to shrink the tail and study a wolf's tail to perfect. Try to study the eye, if your trying cartoony or realism. (Eyes are concealed, not open!) Try to sketch more of each body part on a different page then once you feel your more open to parts of a wolf. :) Nice job anyways!
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XxSkelly-BooxX Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like it C:
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XxTheExiledOnexX Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danke~
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Obsidianthewolf Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yes! This is perfect! Amazing improvement already!!!
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XxTheExiledOnexX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ER
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GERSH
HECK YEA
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Hedghog2234 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Photographer
COOL!
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XxTheExiledOnexX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!~
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Hedghog2234 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Photographer
XD YAY!
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XxTheExiledOnexX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconyeahplz:
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Hedghog2234 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Photographer
:lol:
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tiptoeling Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this looks awesome!!!! :)
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